Last week, I shared the story of a children’s book manuscript that had an extremely advanced vocabulary. You can read my post RIGHT HERE.
I asked you guys and gals to weigh in with your opinions on this topic and we received more comments than any other article we’ve published this year! The vast majority of you stated that dumbing down children’s books is a bad idea.
Here are just a few of your comments:
“The simple fact of the matter is, if the parents are well educated, they will teach their kids long before they even start school.”
– Don Kent
“NO! Do not dumb down words for children to understand. If they don’t know what something means, they usually ask. Not only that, as a story is repeated over and over, they will “get it” pretty much anyway.”
– Lynn Duke
“Actually, I feel we should never dumb down anything for any age group. Use the language as intended, encourage questions, encourage research, etc. Let the story be the story.”
– A.R. Tolle
“I love the idea of a children’s book full of good vocabulary and a glossary! My grandchildren speak ‘older than their years’ and we think its a good thing.”
– Erika Wright
“I homeschooled my children and always purposefully filled our home library with books that were beyond their grade level. I enjoyed watching my son reach for and conquer books that expanded his vocabulary. Both my children became avid readers and often awed adults with their mastery of language.”
– Joy Steward
“I’m also an educator, so don’t get me started. My daughter was reading Harry Potter at seven, much to her teacher’s chagrin. I could wax on, but just wanted to give a shout out to NO DUMBING DOWN!”
– Terrie Leigh Relf
REPLY TO TERRIE FROM ANGELA: Our oldest was told to bring his favorite book to 1st grade so he could learn how to write a book report. His teacher called me later that evening, saying, “Did you know your son is reading The Stand by Stephen King?!” She thought it was not age-appropriate.
I told her, “If my kid wants to read a 1200-page novel then I am NOT going to stop him.” (He’d already read it three times.)
“Children develop receptive language skills before expressive language skills. Studies have shown that children who heard more words in early childhood had better overall language skills and success in school. I vote for vocabulary rich children’s books!”
– Carol Regli
“I don’t advocate dumbing down either vocabulary or concepts for young readers. Because we favored books that fell in line with our preferences, both of my children were reading well by age 4 and had excellent vocabularies. (When a sweet old lady spied my 3-1/2-year old shopping at a bookstore with me at 7 months pregnant, she asked my daughter so sweetly, ‘Well, are you going to get a little brother or a little sister?’ And my kid looked at her like she was the stupidest lady on earth and said, ‘Well I won’t know that until it comes out of my mother’s uterus, will I?'”
– Fran Levy
“I once knew a children’s book editor who told me, ‘When it comes to writing for children, you should always ‘play UP’ to your audience, never ‘down.'”
– Robert Lindsay
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