Topic, Common Themes, and Winners of the Spring 2011 24-Hour Short Story Contest!

For the past six weeks, we’ve spent every spare moment judging the hundreds of entries submitted for the Spring, 2011 24-Hour Short Story Contest. In case you’re not familiar with our quarterly contest, this is how it works. On the date of the contest, at start-time, we send out the topic for that specific contest to all registered entrants. We also post it online. Entrants then have 24 hours to write and submit their stories. The stories “must deal with the topic in some way to qualify” and they must not exceed the pre-assigned word count.

After reading the entries for each contest, we can see how difficult it is to come up with a unique plot when working with an assigned topic. But, inevitably, a few writers do manage to successfully break away from the pack.

So, step out into the sunshine and have a conversation with an outdoor food vendor…


The fruit vendor smiled at her through sightless eyes, enjoying the warm breeze and salty air. During casual banter with his customers, he seemed to remember the smallest details, even ones they couldn’t remember sharing with him in the past. The girl had been coming to his stand daily for as long as she could remember. As she turned to
leave, she patted his hand and said, “I’ll see you tomorrow morning, friend.”

Still smiling, he replied, “No, you won’t…”

(Stories must touch on this topic in some way to qualify.)

Before you continue reading, take a moment to consider where you would take that story…

Here are our notes about common themes that emerged from the last contest.

  • Lots of stories featured tsunamis (it isn’t unusual for many stories to borrow from current events)

  • Not surprisingly, many food vendors died.

  • Several food vendors were retiring.

  • A few stories had euthanasia themes.

  • Some vendors were secretly eloping.

  • Lots of stories featured the customer being murdered by the street vendor.

  • There were several kidnappings.

  • There were also quite a few suicides.

  • Several stories told of the girl not knowing she was actually the fruit vendor’s daughter.

  • Most blind vendors had gained special insight due to the loss of their vision.

  • The fruit vendor recognizes the girl by her step or smell.

  • The fruit vendor is in love with the girl.

  • And, finally, a few fruit vendors were wearing Ray Ban sunglasses.

  • Despite the rule specifying otherwise, we always get a handful of stories where a character is named Angela or Angie.

  • Also despite the rule specifying otherwise, we always get several stories where the main character is a writer or a journalist of some sort and some of them are dealing with writing for a short story contest. Those stories are particularly disappointing because we see so many of them during each contest.

As with all contests, some common themes come back again and again, no matter what the topic is. These include:
  • We find out at the end that the entire story was just a movie/TV scene/play or we find out the first scene of the story (usually the topic itself) is from a movie/TV show/play.

  • The reader finds out at the very end that the main character is actually dead (is a ghost or spirit of some sort), or that the main character has dementia. We always get several retirement home or other senior citizen stories.

  • The main character dies at the end and is met by a loved one or an angel of some sort.

  • The story is dramatic but you find out at the end that the characters are really children playing make-believe or that the main characters are actually animals, not people.

  • A common fairy tale or other well-known tale is the basis of the story.

  • Well-known historical, fairy tale or cartoon character is featured in the story.

  • You find out at the end that the story was all a dream.

Links to the winning stories appear here:

The Summer, 2011 contest will be held on July 9, 2011.

Each contest is limited to 500 entrants and they usually fill up so don’t delay if you want to enter.

You can see the complete list of 85 prizes, and sign up, here:

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