World’s Worst Query Letters and Book Proposals For August, 2021!

World’s Worst Query Letters and Book Proposals For August, 2021!

Oh, yes! We know you’re excited!! Today, we’re going to share another installment of our popular column, World’s Worst Query Letters and Book Proposals.

We’ve been savings these for a few weeks now so there are a LOT to entertain you! As always, I’ve saved the best for last!

Featured below are real quotes from query letters and book proposals submitted to us over the past few weeks. Yes, we can learn from others’ mistakes!

In case you’re a new reader, please know that we are a publication about writing and publishing FOR WRITERS. When someone contacts us using our online contact form, directly above that form is a link to our writer’s guidelines, in a very large, bold, red font. The link to our guidelines is also at the top of every page on our website.

Are you ready? ENJOY!


HELLO. IF YOU’D READ OUR GUIDELINES, YOU’D HAVE KNOWN THAT WE DON’T PUBLISH ARTICLES ABOUT ANY OF THOSE TOPICS!

Hello, I work on various articles: health, food, sports, travel, etc. If you need any to write your articles contact me

CLEARLY YOU DON’T VALUE THE IMPORTANCE OF TIME, OR YOU WOULD HAVE ACTUALLY OFFERED UP A TOPIC PITCH, AND NOT WASTED OUR TIME TELLING US HOW DEDICATED YOU ARE.

I am a person who loves language and literature and this is the reason I took up content creation as my career. I have got my content published in a couple of anthology books and magazines. I am very hardworking and dedicated, I make sure that whatever I have been given I do it to the best of my capability. I value the importance of time.

WE’D BE FAR MORE “OKAY” IF YOU LEARNED PROPER CAPITALIZATION AND PUNCTUATION, AND IF YOU’D MADE JUST A TEENSY-WEENSY BIT OF EFFORT TO FIND OUT WHAT OUR PUBLICATION IS ABOUT.

Hi , Greetings ! I would like to write an article on the subject “Infertility-A slow poison!”.
Would you be okay if i write on the above subject under category “Feature article”
Looking forward to your support.

WHY DO I SUDDENLY FEEL LIKE I NEED A SHOWER?

I am passion in writing .

OH, NUTS! YOU WERE CLOSE BUT WE’RE LOOKING FOR GOOD WRITERS!

Iam a good worker

THAT’S FUNNY. HAVING NEVER WORKED A DAY FOR OUR COMPANY, HOW COULD YOU KNOW WHAT OUR “NORMS” ARE?

During this time I have worked for may companies and I have demonstrated that I am fully capable of fulfilling the expectations of your norms.

AND, WE WISH US GOOD LUCK IN OUR ENDEAVORS…

I want to write for us

YOU CLEARLY HAVEN’T BOTHERED TO READ SO MUCH AS OUR HOME PAGE, MUCH LESS “EACH AND EVERY CONTENTS.” BUT, HEY, WE COULD SURE USE SOMEONE TO CLEAR THIS DARNED PAPER JAM IN OUR PRINTER!

I have seen your website. I have read each and every contents of your website and I really like the quality of all those contents, so I like to send you some high-quality contents for your website, which will help to increase more traffic of your website. The content topics will be on- How to refill an inkjet printer cartridge, Best laser printer recommendation for home and office, How to connect printer to a wireless router(solved), Fix paper jam issue of a printer, How much does an electrician makes, what plumbing service can fix water heater issue, etc.

NO PROBLEM. APPLICATIONS ARE AVAILABLE ON THE TENTH FLOOR,  RIGHT NEXT TO THE SWIMMING POOL AND OYSTER BAR.

I want to apply for articles on market secret

STEP 1: CLICK ON “WRITE FOR US”
STEP 2: FOLLOW THE ****ING INSTRUCTIONS!

How to write marketing article In write for us

…IN WHAT??

5 years experience

..BUT DEFINITELY NOT HERE.

Definetly my article will make money .

LADIES AND GENTLEMEN – THE GREAT JOHN NASH!!

I have written the article about my own concept of marketting

SOMETIMES WE JUST WANT TO SHOOT OURSELVES…

Writer: my article is all about business strategy

Our Managing Editor: MY article is all about reading instructions before offering an article to an editor. Please read it.

Writer: Yes, I am interested.

I’M ALREADY MIDDLE AGED AND I DON’T NEED YOU TO WRITE ABOUT IT FOR ME.

Hello
I want to write about Greek history or middle age

IF I “REPLAY” THIS, IT’S JUST GOING TO GIVE ME A PSYCHOTIC HEADACHE.

I am a writer and my main is a suspense thriller story, What topic should we article about and what topics should we be writing about?please replay

GREAT! CAN’T WAIT TO RECEIVE A QUERY LETTER FROM YOU SOME DAY!

I would like to write for you.

ANOTHER ONE THAT MADE US WANT TO JUMP OFF A CLIFF AFTER SETTING OURSELVES ON FIRE…
The author submitted a 3-page article on digital marketing to be published as a book. We told him we only publish full-length books at BookLocker. We don’t publish articles.

Reply from the Author:
Hi,

Ok, You can Publish full-length books and Proceed. Due to this Lock down period, I can’t invest single dollar. Expect your good reply.

What about my benefits?. .

Thanks

JUST SAY NO TO DRUGS, KIDS.

and i need permanent post on your site with 2 do follow links and i give you many orders and make business with you so please tell me sponsor post price of your site

TITLE OF OUR REPLY: REJECTED – BUT CAN YOU COME PLUNGE OUR TOILET?

Title of article submitted on spec:
Basic Safety Tips for Plumbing

HOW TO GET YOUR MANUSCRIPT REJECTED IN TWO EASY STEPS:
An author sent us all of his information, but not his manuscript. Angela sent him an email telling him how to do that.

Author’s response:
I’m aware of this. I’m still thinking this over. Chill out.

When he does submit his manuscript, it will be rejected, with a reference to the page on our website that clearly states we don’t work with jerks.

See more entertaining installments of World’s Worst Book Proposals and Query Letters RIGHT HERE.

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5 Responses to "World’s Worst Query Letters and Book Proposals For August, 2021!"

  1. Linda G  August 7, 2021 at 9:02 pm

    Well my father was right after all. He always said people are stupid. While I would edit that to say some people he had a point.

    So since I can edit then I should write an article about listening to your parents, right?

    I know. Go paint my toenails.

  2. Carrie H Younce  August 7, 2021 at 12:51 pm

    Has “China” decided to attack you en mas? Every month, as I read these, I can’t help but recall a babysitter I had as a child. She was the adopted daughter of a missionary returned from China. Her English was “growing” and she always covered her mouth with her hand and blushed when she laughed. Looking back, if what I actually experienced was turned into an article, it would be considered “racist”. Ah well… Thanks for the memories (and the smiles).

    • Brian Whiddon - Managing Editor  August 8, 2021 at 3:06 pm

      LOL…not necessarily China. Some o f these are obviously foreign. But we do get some from clearly English speaking folks. (Well, not “clearly”). But these are great examples of people who don’t even want to put forth the effort to understand the publication they are contacting for work opportunities – a HUGE mistake in any profession.

  3. Richard McHenry (Atwood)  August 6, 2021 at 11:04 pm

    I guess you can sadly tell a lot about modern society by the music they love, the way they drive, what they think is funny, who they vote for, how willing they are to share their personal business yapping on a cellphone in public, or the letters they write…. Scary?

  4. Donna Deines  August 6, 2021 at 7:17 pm

    Thank you, Angela, I needed a good, healthy laugh today.